that gameover thread, apm, why did you remove it? that guy you're talking about
sucks. all he knows is bully others- even a girl like me?! whoa- i think he's
gay
Quote by shoujoboyEnglish mother
f***er... do you speak it? Nothing like a good trolling to get your motor
running.
Shoo shoujoboi. Get your own peeps. You just jealous sho coz you ain't comin'. I
get to hang and chill with mah homies.
merged: 05-16-2008 ~ 12:11pm
Quote by kawaiihime04yes!
approval n lng ng parents q & ksbay kulang
Just tell them its a big even and that I'll be there to take care of all of you.
(wise-ass Ken)
dude, i'm sorry for posting it in tagalog *won't do it again, promise*. BTW,
about it, my dad's not here and i'm still seeking for his approval. well, i hope
azyl12 can come 'coz she's the only friend my parents trust the most. if she's
coming then there's a big chance i'm coming ^_^ i'm looking forward to the event
and the free t-shirt you'll be giving
merged: 05-16-2008 ~ 06:42pm
*faints*
gnon?!?!?!
fawk, dyahe boi! prang gs2 q pkaen s pc s gnwa q
T_T
ken po? c kuya akaiken?
merged: 05-16-2008 ~ 06:49pm
nga pla, thanks s gnwa m. touch po q ^_^
Is that fire on the background? Its kinda hard to tell. And IMO, it doesn't
really go well with the foreground. I understand what's the meaning of this
piece but it just doesn't feel in sync with the character and flowers and
all.
Click me!
The areas highlighted by red are areas of contrast. Light foreground on light
background doesn't go very well. Though the large strokes does help defining
your character more. You could also try giving it a more defined blazing inferno
background. The more animated it looks or the more sense of motion it conveys
will definitely bring the focus on the character.
The flowers on the upper left side doesn't look balanced (highlighted by white).
They look like they were just copy-pasted on there. Also the branch that's
behind the character looks like its part of her hair (highlighted with cyan). It
looks off. I suggest moving it around her silhouette and try to work out its
angle and position. And I don't know if I should mention this but you're
signature is rather large and the Vista-esque taskbar... definitely
overkill.
Overall you got great stuff here. I love the detail work on the flower and
characters but its definitely the background that needs work.
I suppose it is fire. Since all I did was replicate the picture, I didn't really
feel like making detailed flame work. I wouldn't really know how anyways. I do
see the areas of concern that you brought up that will be worked on though. I
know computer screens are different...but the area around the hair is pretty
distinct where the head and branch are. I didn't know how big the signature was
either since I made it for my 1920 x 1200 laptop, but I made it on my sister's
1440 x 990 laptop (parents...). I usually make the signature so it is precisely
covered by the toolbar at the bottom. But I couldn't really tell, so I guessed.
Quote by jakulitoStep 2? You've got a
list for that sorta stuff? Maybe you've been babied too much... heheehe
j/k
No, I have no plans actually. The step 2 is more to help me face the future. My
parents have pretty much told me that life is nothing but pain and there is no
fun in it. But yes i have been babied too much. I can admit it. But I have had
my share of work and pain. Though Having a list might help me out!
Quote by jakulitoI opted not to post
immediately waiting for a little more interaction from you, Maple but I guess
I'd have to just post now.
Anyways on to my rev-rant... wait, I ain't got a rev-rant... I'd just be saying
what sho said. And no, you don't write like sho. He's conceited. Good review,
Maple. I'd suggest a little humour since I get a sense of reading a brochure
with this one, I ain't referring to the content just the feeling.
I love you, Maple... sho's a liar.
Oh right, I just replied
in his guestbook to be sure he'd see it
Thanks. I'm if I were to attempt humour, it'd come out like shoujoboy's
attempts... or worse DX But I'll try, for you.
Quote by jakulitoI got a weird feelin
when you said baby... I thought to myself: "18 huh, kids these days...
hehehehe"
Thanks I'm glad I can inspire that weird feeling. I
like how you added kids these day at the end there. I tell my friends that we
are still just kids and I get yet at because they are 18 year old adults ready
for life...........and I'm not. That is why I have College step 2 in
preparations for life!
Sorry this is a bit late, but it's just that everytime I read this I laugh and
think it's so true...
I'm now very cautious about where and what I post.
Ngayon ko lang nabasa to pero totoo nga.
nakakatawa! haha!
Sorry this is a bit late, but it's just that everytime I read this I laugh and
think it's so true...
I'm now very cautious about where and what I post.
dali lang gumawa ng widscreen walls noh!
punta ka sa any designing software then create a new file and type mo dun sa
size/reso section
width is 1920 tapos sa height is 1200 pixel tapos you can now create a wallie
you usually do
Thanks for the comment and thank you much more for taking time and checking it
out!
Really appreciate it!
Well how've you been doin'? We haven't posted in each others' guestbook in like
ages!
Yah it has been a while.
I've been doing well. I'm off to college in August, so my parents are having a
hard time. They keep trying to get me to stay at home. Since I'm the baby in the
family they are afraid of being alone again. And It will be my first time out in
the simiworld!^_^
What have you been up to? I hope that only good things have happend.
~See yah Later!
merged: 03-31-2008 ~ 02:40pm
napapadalas na sya uli ah... ehhehe
Ok lang ako pare! ikaw? Hehe busy na dyud skul.
Wait. Makakaintindi ka ng bisaya? hehe sorry ha!
Meron na akong mga bagong drawing. hehe mukhang naimprove me konte hehe
Ikaw kung gusto mo tingnan ^__^
Quote by zairaone
of your best wallpaper ever!
i should say! you're getting good in making abstract wallpapers
i like the great extraction of the scan! very clean and no bad rigdes!
the background is just cool with combination of retro and abstract
love the splatter brushwork + the gradient coloring of the background,
what brings the coolness of the wall? well of course that yellow thing in her
hand...
well dunno what you called that.....well i love the text too! nice texture in
it!
though it would be nice if you make the text a bit smaller, as for the sparkles
on
the bg i suggest that you remove that... it ruined the retroic abstract theme
so pls...remove that but its your choice whether to remove that or not
too bad its not widescreen too but
oh well... Overall! great job on everything +
minamangha mo ako! grabe! resourceful ka talaga! Lintik ka! gumamit ka na nga ng
photoshop! +fav!
I just love it when you give comments, zai. Detailed na detailed.
ehheeh
Anyways, I did what you asked. I took out the sparkles. Ano ba resolution mo, I
think I can make this widescreen.
cool! you remove those sparkles!
me reso is 1920x1200
Quote by jakulitoI don't how or why but
your review reminds me of mine (I mean the writing style and sorts). If you
don't agree, fine. Let our lives proceed onwards without a hint of this
comment.
I'd skip on the Theoritical Proper English usage lectures as it seems you've
been schooled on that subject already.
As pointed out already you should always assume that the reader is unfamiliar
with that title you are reviewing. Doing so will help out some people that go
scratch their heads asking themselves "What is KEY?". Another thing
you should note is to know when enough is enough. Try to trim down on the plot
and character analysis bit to support your personal choice on what should or
should've been.
I'm not sure what reason you have for writing:
Quote by Lariel I'm really sorry if you
dislike my opinion of Clannad or my words somehow offended you greatly, but
that's how I think. Or perhaps I'm venting my frustrations out in this
review.
Please point out my mistakes and don't hesitate to be
critical.
... but if its because you've read the past reviews and seen shoujoboi drop
bombs then rest assured that he won't bite.
No, he bites. He definitely bites. And then he drops nuclear bombs on my
reviews. I'm just kidding on that though. I appreciate good criticism -like a
leech on blood- and he provides me ways to improve. I love writing, so it's
better to have someone whack you in the head to make you better. I have to thank
you too, jakulito, for pointing out my mistakes.
I love your signature. It is so hilarious I could cry.... now I feel blonde or
something. Either way, its awesome and so simple the humor is great. Have a
wonderful night and thanks for inadvertantly making me laugh.
Quote by jakulito... Anyways onto your
review; Clear and concise as always. I've noticed you're not the type that takes
out a certain something and exacerbate the details to justify a certain score. I
really like that. Your "masterful word usage" as shoujoboy puts it,
describes the show well in your perspective without going out of your way to
just show what's good or what's bad.
Excellent review, mate.
And sho... you didn't tell me you had a pet.
Thanks Jak, I always appreciate comments and constructive criticism from fellow
reviewers - always a good motivator to produce more stuff. I'm looking forward
to seeing your next submission (which should make me cack myself laughing if
your last one was anything to go by).
that gameover thread, apm, why did you remove it? that guy you're talking about sucks. all he knows is bully others- even a girl like me?! whoa- i think he's gay
merged: 05-16-2008 ~ 02:02pm
dude, i'm sorry for posting it in tagalog *won't do it again, promise*. BTW, about it, my dad's not here and i'm still seeking for his approval. well, i hope azyl12 can come 'coz she's the only friend my parents trust the most. if she's coming then there's a big chance i'm coming ^_^ i'm looking forward to the event and the free t-shirt you'll be giving
merged: 05-16-2008 ~ 06:42pm
*faints*
gnon?!?!?!
fawk, dyahe boi! prang gs2 q pkaen s pc s gnwa q
T_T
ken po? c kuya akaiken?
merged: 05-16-2008 ~ 06:49pm
nga pla, thanks s gnwa m. touch po q ^_^
Woi! hanep naman sa user page pinoy na pinoy haha! aus din ung personal photo pang bench billborad wohoo ang init!
Musta na?! hehe...long time no hear wee~
Punta kau mangaholix ha kita kita tau dun
Excited na tuloy ako
Is that fire on the background? Its kinda hard to tell. And IMO, it doesn't really go well with the foreground. I understand what's the meaning of this piece but it just doesn't feel in sync with the character and flowers and all.
Click me!
The areas highlighted by red are areas of contrast. Light foreground on light background doesn't go very well. Though the large strokes does help defining your character more. You could also try giving it a more defined blazing inferno background. The more animated it looks or the more sense of motion it conveys will definitely bring the focus on the character.
The flowers on the upper left side doesn't look balanced (highlighted by white). They look like they were just copy-pasted on there. Also the branch that's behind the character looks like its part of her hair (highlighted with cyan). It looks off. I suggest moving it around her silhouette and try to work out its angle and position. And I don't know if I should mention this but you're signature is rather large and the Vista-esque taskbar... definitely overkill.
Overall you got great stuff here. I love the detail work on the flower and characters but its definitely the background that needs work.
I suppose it is fire. Since all I did was replicate the picture, I didn't really feel like making detailed flame work. I wouldn't really know how anyways. I do see the areas of concern that you brought up that will be worked on though. I know computer screens are different...but the area around the hair is pretty distinct where the head and branch are. I didn't know how big the signature was either since I made it for my 1920 x 1200 laptop, but I made it on my sister's 1440 x 990 laptop (parents...). I usually make the signature so it is precisely covered by the toolbar at the bottom. But I couldn't really tell, so I guessed.
No, I have no plans actually. The step 2 is more to help me face the future. My parents have pretty much told me that life is nothing but pain and there is no fun in it. But yes i have been babied too much. I can admit it. But I have had my share of work and pain. Though Having a list might help me out!
Oh right, I just replied in his guestbook to be sure he'd see it
Thanks. I'm if I were to attempt humour, it'd come out like shoujoboy's attempts... or worse DX But I'll try, for you.
Thanks I'm glad I can inspire that weird feeling.
I
like how you added kids these day at the end there. I tell my friends that we
are still just kids and I get yet at because they are 18 year old adults ready
for life...........and I'm not. That is why I have College step 2 in
preparations for life! 
Ngayon ko lang nabasa to pero totoo nga.
nakakatawa! haha! 
Yo. Not hiding. Just very busy.
Oh?! Picture mo yun?! Di nga?!
Yan ba yung pic na sinabi mo sa min na na-delete jak?
LOL
hello po jak-sama!
Yes, Baby as in I'm the youngest in my family. Sorry, guess I should have phrased it differently.
That sounds like an awsome job!^_^ hehehe
I think I will do just that!^_^ A life size blow up doll! They can take it with them everywhere. heheh........that is a great idea!^_^
Yo, Jak. Musta naman?
Grabe lang kung burahin pa nila picture mo. Adik sila.
Ayos sig mo ah. Hehehe
Sa 19 na ba talaga yun EB? Baka pumunta ako kapag pwede.
Sorry this is a bit late, but it's just that everytime I read this I laugh and think it's so true...
I'm now very cautious about where and what I post.
mwahahaha
i'll wait for your wall! 
merged: 04-02-2008 ~ 09:15am
dali lang gumawa ng widscreen walls noh!
punta ka sa any designing software then create a new file and type mo dun sa size/reso section
width is 1920 tapos sa height is 1200 pixel tapos you can now create a wallie you usually do
merged: 04-02-2008 ~ 06:38pm
ay ganun....m....di bale nalang ok na sakin yung orig reso..
sa gagawin ko nalang wallpaper sa psp ko
ay naku! jak-sama! photoshop dood!
or any
shopped softwares! waaaah!
um...pwede mo i-resize sa YM?! O_O grabe ka jak-sama!
para taga ibang planeta ka talaga! LOL
Yah it has been a while.
I've been doing well. I'm off to college in August, so my parents are having a hard time. They keep trying to get me to stay at home. Since I'm the baby in the family they are afraid of being alone again. And It will be my first time out in the simiworld!^_^
What have you been up to? I hope that only good things have happend.
~See yah Later!
Ok lang ako pare! ikaw? Hehe busy na dyud skul.
Wait. Makakaintindi ka ng bisaya? hehe sorry ha!
Meron na akong mga bagong drawing. hehe mukhang naimprove me konte hehe
Ikaw kung gusto mo tingnan ^__^
Thankz!
cool! you remove those sparkles!
me reso is 1920x1200
No, he bites. He definitely bites. And then he drops nuclear bombs on my reviews.
I'm just kidding on that though. I appreciate good criticism -like a
leech on blood- and he provides me ways to improve. I love writing, so it's
better to have someone whack you in the head to make you better. I have to thank
you too, jakulito, for pointing out my mistakes. 
I love your signature. It is so hilarious I could cry.... now I feel blonde or something. Either way, its awesome and so simple the humor is great. Have a wonderful night and thanks for inadvertantly making me laugh.
yup..first one..and namamatay na ako..haha..anf hirap palang gumawa ng wallpaper..
..and thx ^^ I hope it will turn out good enough ^^
Thanks Jak, I always appreciate comments and constructive criticism from fellow reviewers - always a good motivator to produce more stuff. I'm looking forward to seeing your next submission (which should make me cack myself laughing if your last one was anything to go by).
haha i greeted u in Nami FC u didnt visit the place ~_^ .
But damn man this place is as dead as ever. No one bothers to reply the damn greets anyway . Losing interest again :/
Langya, ano itong userpage mo, extension ng FLIP?
Astig ah
merged: 03-17-2008 ~ 09:07pm
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